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<3 But the panels in this are so expressive! You are so talented this comic is great and every page is well worth waiting for! Setting up so many interesting questions as well.
Each page of DNA is stronger than the last. From the expressions of the characters and conveying their emotions. You can see and feel Helix's surprise and almost sense of being aghast at the idea of there being a female version of him.
And I love how Len is there to be all... buzzkill, almost. He's so blunt and puts a sudden stop to Helix's reaction. Its nice, and comical. I love the dynamic these two have and it's only a few pages in. XP
I like Len *pets him* he's a bit of an arse but then again that's probably why I like him XD
The expressions are again gorgeous, I think you do wonderful expressions. I really just... envy so much.
To me the "I can't believe you found a girl" thought bubble seems really ... stark? is that the word? It really stands out and doesn't seem as nicely in the scene as your text placement and such normally is. IDK if that's the effect you wanted or not.
I LOVE the way Helix's waistcoat is just falling away from his body in that last panel, omg.
Yeah something went wrong with that bubble during the export... it's not supposed to look like that but I hadn't noticed!
Aww thank youu!!